That ends my complaints about the gambits, but I have a very similar 'word order' complaint about some of the accessory descriptions, such as the one for the "Tourmaline Ring" (just one of many), which is described like this:
Ex.4: Descr. Line 1 = "Half Damage:"
Description Line 2 = "Poison, SapImmune:"
While that is understandable, it is not proper use of the language, which should rather be:
Suggested Line 1 = "Damage: Halved"
Suggested Line 2 = "Immunities: Poison, Sap" or perhaps "Immune: Poison, Sap"
The second choice for line 2 would reduce its string length by 4 characters, and would also make the lower string 'line up' better with the word "Damage:" on the line above. So that may be the best choice, though less 'correct' IMO than the first alternative.